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Space Funeral has two profiles, think it's worth revising them.
Anyway, Speed should be Transonic, not Supersonic- you don't need to be faster than something to dodge it, so this is safer.4
LS should scale to Moon, aka Superhuman because of sheer size. If not that then at least Athletic Human due to the whole Muscled thing
As for abilities, most are good.
Instead of being Unknown, Moon should be 9-B, scaling off Philip. She was apparently stabilizing the City of Forms, as it started collapsing the second she died (and it couldn't have taken more than a minute for it to go down), but I don't think that fits our guidelines for that kinda feat, as Moon likely corrupted it with her magic, nothing else.
Lifting Strength should be superhuman via sheer size, and speed should scale to Phillip.
As for abilities, this is a list of her attacks.
So all those should be added. I have no idea what Mind Manip is from so maybe that should go.
The "************" in the quote should also be uncensored- it's a fairly mild swear word I doubt that's an issue.
Philip
First off, his name is Phillip with two Ls. Should be changed.Anyway, Speed should be Transonic, not Supersonic- you don't need to be faster than something to dodge it, so this is safer.4
LS should scale to Moon, aka Superhuman because of sheer size. If not that then at least Athletic Human due to the whole Muscled thing
As for abilities, most are good.
- Swordsmanship -> Weapon Mastery (Knives, Swords and Guns)
- Can damage ghosts -> Non-Physical Interaction
- Body Control (His stat boosts are literally him flexing to make himself stronger)
- Through Mystery:
- Empathic Manipulation (Most status effects in Space Funeral fall under this. Distracted, Moral AKA pacifist, Berserk, Spooked which is also Fear Manip)
- Death Manipulation ("PHILLIP spoke a word of power! SWARTHY SKULL collapsed into dust", "PHILLIP quoted an old, old song! SKULL CRAB got a heart attack and died! SPOOKY ARM got a heart attack and died!", "PHILLIP forgot what he was going to say! GROUND SHARK stopped moving and died instantly!", "PHILLIP begged for mercy! BLOOD GHOUL suddenly died! For a second you contemplate the possibility of a divine presence at work here . . . Probably not.")
- Fire Manipulation ("SWAMPTROGG bursts into flame! PHILLIP doesn't know what's going on!", "SKULL CRAB spontaneously combusted!")
- Biological Manipulation ("GROUND SHARK gets an attack of SHARK GAS and explodes!", "SWAMPTROGG gets a CRAMP for 30 DAMAGE! PHILLIP is cautiously sympathetic!", "BLOOD WOLF dies of a sudden blood clot")
Moon
Instead of being Unknown, Moon should be 9-B, scaling off Philip. She was apparently stabilizing the City of Forms, as it started collapsing the second she died (and it couldn't have taken more than a minute for it to go down), but I don't think that fits our guidelines for that kinda feat, as Moon likely corrupted it with her magic, nothing else.
Lifting Strength should be superhuman via sheer size, and speed should scale to Phillip.
As for abilities, this is a list of her attacks.
- Thunderous Blow (Possibly Elec Manip)
- Brain Freeze (Likely Ice Manip)
- Slice (Natural Weaponry)
- Muscle (Statistics Amp)
- Healing Blast (... Healing)
- Burning Rain (Fire Manip)
So all those should be added. I have no idea what Mind Manip is from so maybe that should go.
The "************" in the quote should also be uncensored- it's a fairly mild swear word I doubt that's an issue.
