Sound Five Revision Part 1

[Crabmeat08]

I was planning to release all five at once, but since time is tight I have no idea when I’ll be able to finish the others, so I’m just going ahead with it like this.

There’s not much notable to say; it’s all self-explanatory and mostly just sources, and I replaced some dead links with updated ones.

Jirobo’s name is actually spelled “Jirōbō,” so that probably should be corrected in his profile. It’s not particularly important, but I think it’s worth noting.

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:Crabmeat08/Tayuya

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:Crabmeat08/Jir%C5%8Db%C5%8D

 

[BeTheWay1rst]

 

[Testarossa002]

okay....this is actually well-done
nice work

 

[Tllmbrg]

General editing notes:
Remove periods in the end of brackets, so no .) in there.
Put citations after punctuation like periods and commas.
Ideally you should swap longer wordings such as "capable of" with "can" when applicable.

Tayuya​

P&A notes:

Mind Manipulation (With Demonic Flute: Illusionary Warriors Manipulating Melody, Tayuya plays her Demonic Flute to control the three Doki, with the tune she plays determining how they behave)

Shouldn't this be limited at best, since it only works on the Dokis? Really I'm not sure if this is really mind control, and more how she communicates with her summons.

Bodily Weaponry (At the second level of the Cursed Seal, Tayuya has horns, which grow when she exerts herself)

I don't really remember her ever using those horns for combat, so idk about listing this. Sure she has horns now, but we don't give this power to any character that has those, look at someone like Hagoromo.

Large Size

You should list the type of large size and explain it. I assume they'd fall under type 0 off being waaaaay larger than humans.

Intangibility & Absorption (With Revolt of the Demon World, Tayuya plays a melody that causes many intangible, worm-like spirits, composed almost entirely of spiritual energy, to emerge from the mouths of the three Doki relentlessly pursue their targets, draining bites of physical energy as they pass through them)

I'd give them bodily weaponry for the mouth things they spawn.

Lifting Strength: Unknown, up to Class M in the Curse seal second state (Broke out of Shikamaru shadow possession Jutsu. Stronger than Kidomaru)

The rest of her stats say she's superior in strength to Kidomaru and Jirōbō, is there a reason for her base to not scale to their LS?

 

[KingogKings777]

How is the following soul manip?

• Power Nullification, Mind Manipulation & Soul Manipulation (Shinobi can typically break free from and nullify non-ocular Genjutsu by intentionally disrupting the flow of chakra<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:Crabmeat08/Tayuya#cite_note-15"><span>[</span>15<span>]</span></a> within their bodies.)

 

[karo_senpaii]

How is the following soul manip?

Go and ask for where it was accepted in the general discussion thread. Don't derail this CRT

 

[Kaydee1648]

Beautiful
In addition to what tllmbrg said

• Adhesive Manipulation (Shinobi are capable of resisting the effects of adhesives by coating themselves in chakra)
• Ice Manipulation (Ninja who can mold Chakra can send that chakra around their bodies to generate heat and prevent their bodies from freezing. This technique was potent enough to counteract Earth Chain Ice, a technique that freezes its victims from the inside out)
• Adhesive Manipulation (Shinobi are capable of resisting the effects of adhesives by coating themselves in chakra)

Adhesive manipulation is repeated twice for both Jirobo and Tayuya

 

[AlternativePrinciple]

Great work on the profiles, I don’t see anything wrong so far other than the ones pointed out by other

 

[Crabmeat08]

Remove periods in the end of brackets, so no .) in there.
Put citations after punctuation like periods and commas.
Ideally you should swap longer wordings such as "capable of" with "can" when applicable.

These are listed as the default ninja abilities in the most recently revised profiles, specifically Obito's. I can implement these suggestions, but if that's a problem it would need to be done for others as well.

Shouldn't this be limited at best, since it only works on the Dokis? Really I'm not sure if this is really mind control, and more how she communicates with her summons.

Not only Shikamaru's statement, but the databook page also says from the technique's name and description that she controls the Doki and that their actions are directly linked to the tone she plays on the flute. Moreover, all three Doki have their eyes covered yet can pinpoint targets' locations the moment Tayuya plays, so one could argue they have enhanced senses that allow this, but that seems more speculative than mind manipulation.

I don't really remember her ever using those horns for combat, so idk about listing this. Sure she has horns now, but we don't give this power to any character that has those, look at someone like Hagoromo.

If that ability can only be added to those who used the horns in on-screen combat, then yes, it would be removed.

You should list the type of large size and explain it. I assume they'd fall under type 0 off being waaaaay larger than humans.

I'd give them bodily weaponry for the mouth things they spawn.

The rest of her stats say she's superior in strength to Kidomaru and Jirōbō, is there a reason for her base to not scale to their LS?

I only changed stamina, range, and intelligence, the rest of her stats are the same as in the profile. Assuming, I believe the reason is that in her base form she doesn't have many demonstrations of physical strength, but she did hurt Naruto with a punch, so idk

 

[Tllmbrg]

These are listed as the default ninja abilities in the most recently revised profiles, specifically Obito's. I can implement these suggestions, but if that's a problem it would need to be done for others as well.

Yah? If it's a universal thing for Baruto pages they should be edited accordingly yes.

Not only Shikamaru's statement, but the databook page also says from the technique's name and description that she controls the Doki and that their actions are directly linked to the tone she plays on the flute. Moreover, all three Doki have their eyes covered yet can pinpoint targets' locations the moment Tayuya plays, so one could argue they have enhanced senses that allow this, but that seems more speculative than mind manipulation.

I mean, that doesn't prove anything. It's a thing she summoned, heck it's not even fully physical but mainly chakra (So I'm not sure if it would even really have a mind).
At best this is limited because it only works on the Dokis, but even then it feels like a stretch considering she's just directing them.

I only changed stamina, range, and intelligence, the rest of her stats are the same as in the profile. Assuming, I believe the reason is that in her base form she doesn't have many demonstrations of physical strength, but she did hurt Naruto with a punch, so idk

Well there's no reason to assume she's suddenly a lot weaker in LS than the other two, especially spider dude who's not really focused on sheer physicals like Jirobo.

 

[KingogKings777]

Go and ask for where it was accepted in the general discussion thread. Don't derail this CRT

Asked but its on the profile at hand thats apart of the topic so dont really see how thats dreailing at all.

 

[Crabmeat08]

Yah? If it's a universal thing for Baruto pages they should be edited accordingly yes.

Sure

I mean, that doesn't prove anything. It's a thing she summoned, heck it's not even fully physical but mainly chakra (So I'm not sure if it would even really have a mind).
At best this is limited because it only works on the Dokis, but even then it feels like a stretch considering she's just directing them.

The Doki are the three large, muscular guys; they are entirely physical, what isn’t physical are the ghosts that reside in their mouths. Nothing suggests they lack minds at all.

Well there's no reason to assume she's suddenly a lot weaker in LS than the other two, especially spider dude who's not really focused on sheer physicals like Jirobo.

If everyone agrees, we give Class K to base Tayuya just like Kidomaru and that's it

 

[Crabmeat08]

Bump

 

[Crabmeat08]

Bump

 

[Tllmbrg]

@LordTracer @Damage3245

 

[Crabmeat08]

Bump

 

[Raiden38]

I was planning to release all five at once, but since time is tight I have no idea when I’ll be able to finish the others, so I’m just going ahead with it like this.

There’s not much notable to say; it’s all self-explanatory and mostly just sources, and I replaced some dead links with updated ones.

Jirobo’s name is actually spelled “Jirōbō,” so that probably should be corrected in his profile. It’s not particularly important, but I think it’s worth noting.

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:Crabmeat08/Tayuya

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:Crabmeat08/Jir%C5%8Db%C5%8D

It seems fine to me now the profiles are a little cleaner