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Some changes for the best non-protagonist of InoBato

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Well, well. Hajime is cool, I'll just say that. I feel that he is much better protagonist than Andou, and I am pleased that he has his own chapters in the novel.

Anyway, the important thing here are some changes.

Everything is here.

There is the explanation for his new powers (some are already in the profile, but it doesn't matter). I cannot give scans, because the novel is not translated in English, but I can read it because a person who speaks Spanish translated it from Japanese to Spanish (at least some important volumes). Instead, I tried to translate the feats from Spanish to English (my English is poor, so idk).

Hajime's current profile is quite poor, and it was created a long time ago. So that also needs changes.

First, "BFR and Memory Manipulation via Pinpoint Abyss." Just no. BFR I guess it refers to the black hole of Pinpoint Abyss, instead it could simply be placed "Black Hole Creation". As for Memory Manip, I think it's a common mistake for those who only watched the anime and misunderstood a scene from episode 7.

When Hajime used Pinpoint Abyss in a guy, the man returned but without his powers and losing his memory. It is not explained in the anime, but the novel says that when a superpower user loses the war (whether he dies or surrenders), he revives and returns but losing his powers and memory. Basically, it is not done by Hajime, it is done by the fairies in charge of war. Then, those two abilities can be removed.

Second.

"Attack Potency: Building level (Nearly destroyed F's base during his fight with Umeko, implied to be capable of killing Yusano)"

No, this is an exaggeration. Hajime did not even destroy one part of the F base, during his battle with Umeko (System), it is said that he destroyed part of the room where Umeko was, but he did not nearly destroy the entire base. It should simply be changed to at least wall level. Able to kill Yusano? Yusano has no feat of that level, at least she would be street level (and speculating). However, when Hajime hit Yusano he created a crater in the wall iirc. As I said before, it simply comes down to 9-B.

"Speed: Subsonic (noted to have exceptional speed by other Fairy War fighters, should be comparable to Sayumi)"

Hajime has subsonic feats, but none of those mentioned. First, why is Sayumi mentioned? She is simply a normal high school girl physically (maybe athlete level since practicing martial arts). Hajime's subsonic feats are in the link I mentioned before, he is faster than the human eye on more than one occasion.

I think that's all for now. There are other additions, but I'll take care of it, since they aren't as relevant.
 
Since you personally asked me to be here I'll take a look later.

Ve a insultarme amistosamente al muro si ves que me demoro demasiado, que me habré olvidado
 
Okay, didn't take too long.

Everything here seems fine. Your arguments seems to be logical so I agree with this.
 
ChaosAyase~ said:
Could I translate the feats myself and make them scans?
Link the original scans and then translate what they say. Not sure if that's what you meant.
 
Link the original scans and then translate what they say. Not sure if that's what you meant.

It doesn't matter, I'll take care of that. I will add scans when I have time, then.
 
From a glance, this all seems pretty acceptable to me!
 
This seems to make sense, but if the statistics are invalid, we preferably need to scale them from something else instead.
 
idk, as I said, the only thing that should be changed is Hajime's tier. He along with System destroyed much of a room. However, also can scale Akutagawa who can already destroy walls.
 
You can ask ShiroyashaGinSan, if necessary.
 
Cropfist said:
And does anyone on the Multilingual Members List check the original text?
For what? First, it is a verse with 9-B feats. Also, Kiryuu Hajime's profile is much better than the version that was outdated until recently. It is not very controversial.

Also, there are many verses of light novels/web novels within the wiki which use fan translations.
 
If you doubt the veracity of the translation, I don't think you should exaggerate to simply 9-B feats and the powers within the verse have only a simple effect. If this were an update of something universal, multiversal or at least Tier 2, you would need to verify the translation, but they are simple 9-B feats.
 
This is a very good point. Is there anything left to do here, or should we close this thread?
 
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