Shion (Light Novel profile Fix)

[Dark_Soul20189]

Hello everyone and welcome to another profile clean up, like usual, we have some downgrades, but alongside them, we also have some upgrades (1 entire upgrade).
(warning may use discord scans temporarily evidence - Also like usual Imgur scans don't work properly - Discord Media scans will be provided[Better than nothing] )

Verse - Tensura Light Novel
Profile - Shion (LN)

As usual, let's start with the downgrades.

Abilities

To start things off, Shion's second key, should be renamed from"Oni" to "wicked Oni", now you may ask why this is relevant? That is simple Wicked Oni's are only "Semi Spiritual-Lifeforms".

Complete Memory, one of Shion’s skills, was the power to record memoriesinto her astral body. In layman’s terms, it let her retain her memories even ifher brain was destroyed. Combine a conscious soul with a set of memories, andyou could regenerate the physical body even if it was vaporized. This madeShion into a special sort of race—call her a demi-spiritual life-form if you want—but essentially, it allowed her to think with her soul, and that meant any effectthat tried to take over her spirit was neutralized. Against Shion, no mindtakeover curses could ever work.

Volume 6, Chapter 5 (temp scan)

That means this needs to be changed

Spiritual Lifeform Physiology (Became an Oni or Youki which is a spiritual lifeform similar to a Dryad

Here I have the new proposal for this key

•Temporary Spiritual Lifeforms Properties (WIth Battle God; Shion can temporarly take on the properties of a Spiritual-Lifeform)

Since she can temporarily take on the properties of a SLF I think this should be fitting.

Though it will remain fully on the profile, it just moved to her 3rd key

Thus Shion was evolved into a Battlesoul Ogre, an uncommon but powerfulchaos elemental—and since it was equipped with Infinite Regeneration, it wasindestructible as long as any magicules remained. The attacks from this bodycause not only physical damage, but also destruction on the spiritual level. Andwhile this was a spiritual life-form with no elemental weaknesses, it held adecisive advantage over all other elements. In a way, Shion had evolved intosomething that could be called the natural enemy of spiritual life-forms.

Volume 15, Chapter 4 (Temp Scan from Discord here)

Just to clear this up, here and now, "Elemental" is the other name for "Spirit" in the verse.


Shion Will get her Regeneration upgrades from High to Low Godly, due to being a semi-spiritual lifeform (Semi-Spiritual lifeforms have low godly regeneration accepted)

• Regeneration (High; Shion has regeneration comparable to Orc Disaster Geld)

to

• Regeneration (Low-Godly; Semi-spiritual lifeforms like Rimuru can regenerate as long as they possess magicules, even if their physical body is completely destroyed)

Will replace "Rimuru with Shion"

Shion Can't use magic so this will be removed

• Magic, Law Manipulation, Subjective Reality and Conceptual Manipulation (Type 1; Magic manipulates the Laws of the World)
• Non-Physical Interaction (Abstractions [Type 1: Law & Concept {Type 1} & Information {Type 2}] & Intangibility; Magic is capable of harming Spiritual Life-Forms who have no physical body)

Though, she can use "Battlewill" something that functions like magic, but is currently not accepted as anything, so it still needs to go.

Removing abilities without any explanation.

Summoning

Abilities with new justifications

Blessed (Has the Crest of Storm and has been named by Rimuru

Automatic Translation (Magic Sense can translate languages automatically)

Teleportation (Can teleport with; Spatial Transfer)

Forcefield Creation (With; Multilayered Barrier)

Berserk Mode and Statistics Amplification (With Ogre berserker; Boosts phyche, stamina, and Strenght, but causes the user to lose self-control)

Statistics Amplification (With Battle God; The upgraded version of Ogre Berserker, it has lost the negative effect of losing self-control)

Intangibility (WIth Battle God; Shion can temporarly take on the properties of a Spirirtual-Lifeform)

Telepathy (Everyone that can use magicules can commuicated via Telepathy)

Range
From this

Range: Tens of meters | Tens of meters | Tens of meters

to this

Range: Extended melee, With her Giant sword, Tens of meters, With BattleWill ) | Extended melee, With her giant Sword Tens of meters, With BattleWill ) | Extended melee, With her giant sword Tens of meters , With BattleWill )

Other Changes
- Shion's 2nd key should be renamed from Oni to Wicked Oni (her race is Wicked Oni, as confirmed here)


Conclusion
-Shion's 2nd key gets renamed to "Wicked Oni"
-Her 2nd key loses or get's a limited variant of the Spiritual Physiology page and is moved to her 3rd key instead.
-Her high-tier regeneration has been upgraded to low-godly.
-She loses the abilities she gained through magic.
-Removed abilities without any justification.
-Added justifications to already accepted abilities.
-Add a justification to her range, and added a tier below the already accepted one.


Votes
Agree - @CodeCCLL, @Sebas-S.P-san, @Lycoris4812, @ActuallySpaceMan42, @TWILIGHT-OP, @Reiner04,
Disagree -
Neutral -


Notes

• No new ability was added, all abilities that "were added" are the currently accepted version of the abilities
• This CRT will mainly remove stuff and clean it up.
• Added new justification to already accepted abilities and statistics.
• If there is anything I have missed, and should be added/changed please notify me.
• Either intagbility or the new physiology will remain.

PS - I wish everyone here a Great Day!

 

[CodeCCLL]

Please don't call staff here for a while, I'll get back to this, and bring up an issue with Oni's.

 

[EJSenpai]

Nice btw are you planning to revise Ln milim's profile as well (for example she isn't immortal like true dragons so no high godly and some grammer mistakes on the profile)

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Nice btw are you planning to revise Ln milim's profile as well (for example she isn't immortal like true dragons so no high godly and some grammer mistakes on the profile)

Starting with the low tiers working my back up, We will see what I do when we get there.

 

[CodeCCLL]

Imgur

Also use Gyazo.

 

[EJSenpai]

Starting with the low tiers working my back up, We will see what I do when we get there.

Ok Appreciate it

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Also use Gyazo.

Am trying to move our stuff there.

 

[CodeCCLL]

Please don't call staff here for a while, I'll get back to this, and bring up an issue with Oni's.

I decided to leave this aside for now because it deserves a separate thread.

Removing abilities without any explanation

•Shion has abilities called Ogre and Divine Berkserker/Battle Mode. While Ogre Berkserker causes the user to lose self-control, Battle Mode perfects this. So the first key should still have Berkserker Mode.
•So for the first key the stats amplifier via "Ogre Berkserker" should also remain.
•Intangibility refers to his ability to temporarily become a Spiritual Lifeform. Therefore, this should be changed to temporaly spritual lifeforms physiology.
•Almost everyone can use magicules to telepathically communicate. Rimuru and Shion definitely spoke via telepathy many times. Therefore, telepathy should also remain.
•I don't know the reason for Summoning, but if no one says anything, it can be removed.

While other things are good, I think you're being too quick to remove abilities . With a highly haxed verse like Tensura this should be the last thing to do.

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

I decided to leave this aside for now because it deserves a separate thread.

Alright.

•Shion has abilities called Ogre and Divine Berkserker/Battle Mode. While Ogre Berkserker causes the user to lose self-control, Battle Mode perfects this. So the first key should still have Berkserker Mode.
•So for the first key the stats amplifier via "Ogre Berkserker" should also remain.
•Intangibility refers to his ability to temporarily become a Spiritual Lifeform. Therefore, this should be changed to temporaly spritual lifeforms physiology.
•Almost everyone can use magicules to telepathically communicate. Rimuru and Shion definitely spoke via telepathy many times. Therefore, telepathy should also remain.
•I don't know the reason for Summoning, but if no one says anything, it can be removed.

Implemented the changes to the Proposal, how does it look now?

While other things are good, I think you're being too quick to remove abilities . With a highly haxed verse like Tensura this should be the last thing to do.

For now, I am just cleaning up, I was planning to re-add them in the future, when we had more evidence for it.

 

[Sebas-S.P-san]

I agree

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Bump

 

[CodeCCLL]

Implemented the changes to the Proposal, how does it look now?

I would suggest Temporary Spiritual Lifeform Properties instead of just Intangibility.

•Temporary Spiritual Lifeforms Properties (WIth Battle God; Shion can temporarly take on the properties of a Spiritual-Lifeform)

Almost everyone can use magicules to telepathically communicate. Rimuru and Shion definitely spoke via telepathy many times.

Also this should be added for telepathy.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Based on OP, seems simple enough.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[PHANtomFELdway]

Bump.

Shouldn’t this only need one mod?

 

[Lycoris4812]

Shouldn’t this only need one mod?

Uh, idk. I just bump.

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Shouldn’t this only need one mod?

Due to the size of this, I would prefer having 2.

 

[CodeCCLL]

By the way, don't add intangibility as a separate ability. It is already contained by the temporary Spiritual Lifeform physiology.

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

By the way, don't add intangibility as a separate ability. It is already contained by the temporary Spiritual Lifeform physiology.

Yep, as added in the notes, it would only be added if the temp SLF proposal was rejected.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

Looks good to me.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Bump.

 

[Tempestdragon6]

hmm

 

[Reiner04]

OP looks alright to me.

 

[Lycoris4812]

Due to the size of this, I would prefer having 2.

Are we good here? We got two now.

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Are we good here? We got two now.

Yeah, it's been implimented, been to busy IRL this month so I forgot to close it...

 

[Reiner04]

Yeah, it's been implimented, been to busy IRL this month so I forgot to close it...

Closing.