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[IsleRootsSaga]

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Help me out.

 

[Mahek_The_Assassin_Silent_Killer]

What help do you require/need?

 

[IsleRootsSaga]

What help do you require/need?

If the profile is good to add. Any errors, feats review etc.

 

[Mahek_The_Assassin_Silent_Killer]

If the profile is good to add. Any errors, feats review etc.

Vlad The Third was a knight known for his brutality and power in battle and was seen as a threat to both enemies and allies due to rumors that Vlad burned down agricultural fields, starved his people, and murdered women and feasted on their flesh by night. In the end he was betrayed and put to death... (You might want to explain how he (now she) resurrected as a female vampire, that part you should add on your own since I have no knowledge of the occurences in this work of fiction specifically)

You could copypaste this grammatically corrected version of the summary (except the bracketed part), and as for Intelligence:

Intelligence: Above Average, Genius in combat

I guess you can put this in given his centuries of experience with weapons

 

[IsleRootsSaga]

You might want to explain how he (now she) resurrected as a female vampire, that part you should add on your own since I have no knowledge of the occurences in this work of fiction specifically)

Hasn’t been touched upon in the manga yet.

 

[Mahek_The_Assassin_Silent_Killer]

OK, then no need to fill that part out, just copypaste the rest as stated:

Intelligence: Above Average, Genius in combat

Vlad The Third was a knight known for his brutality and power in battle and was seen as a threat to both enemies and allies due to rumors that Vlad burned down agricultural fields, starved his people, and murdered women and feasted on their flesh by night. In the end he was betrayed and put to death.

 

[IsleRootsSaga]

Just added some stuff to the intelligence.

 

[Mahek_The_Assassin_Silent_Killer]

Just added some stuff to the intelligence.

OK This works but still need to correct summary grammar

 

[Mahek_The_Assassin_Silent_Killer]

Just added some stuff to the intelligence.

I corrected the summary grammar for you.

 

[Mahek_The_Assassin_Silent_Killer]

If the profile is good to add. Any errors, feats review etc.

Now I think you should be good to add, but you might want to message one or two content moderators to check with them regarding the quality as well.
Thanks for letting me help.

 

[IsleRootsSaga]

Got it thanks.

 

[Psychomaster35]

You don't need a revision to make a profile, you know. Unless it's a tier 1 profile.