Profile Creation Plunderer

[Yamachiho]

It's been a long time since Plunderer has had a character profile. So I created a user blog here. Please scan

 

[Mr. Bambu]

This does need a pretty staggering amount of work.

First, the major bits (formatting can come later), you offer Small Town level as the tier but don't explain that besides the creation of icebergs, which doesn't seem to have a calc. The verse page only has a calc for 8-B. The Speed of Light rating also seems to have no clarification as to why that rating is given.

 

[DaReaperMan]

I am not as kind as Bambu.

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The ==Summary== has barer bones than a skeleton and is not formatted properly, it needs to be a ==heading==.

==Powers and Stats== also needs a heading

nothing says why she'd be at all higher.

Explain her age on the profile.

Reference your PnA section

As Bambu said, complete lack of scans, a calc, or references on Low 7-C and SoL being a thing

Has she never lifted LITERALLY anything? Or tanked any hits whatsoever? Or even Punched or kicked anything?

High is not a stamina rating.

Range LITERALLY cannot be unknown if she's fought anyone as her AP claims.

What does she have on her person usually? That's standard equipment.

High is not an intelligence rating.

It's "None Notable" not "None" for weaknesses.

 

[Yamachiho]

This does need a pretty staggering amount of work.

First, the major bits (formatting can come later), you offer Small Town level as the tier but don't explain that besides the creation of icebergs, which doesn't seem to have a calc. The verse page only has a calc for 8-B. The Speed of Light rating also seems to have no clarification as to why that rating is given.

AP I'm working on it. Will put it on the wiki soon. So I want your opinion.

 

[Yamachiho]

Explain her age on the profile.

Her age, as I understand it, she is 300+

As Bambu said, complete lack of scans, a calc, or references on Low 7-C and SoL being a thing

AP I'm working on it. Will put it on the wiki soon.Just want some opinions.

Has she never lifted LITERALLY anything? Or tanked any hits whatsoever? Or even Punched or kicked anything?

I am working on this matter.

Note I'm not very good at English. Please understand me.

 

[Mr. Bambu]

AP I'm working on it. Will put it on the wiki soon. So I want your opinion.

Well no, you need to make it fit our standards first. You can't put it on the wiki like this, we'll just be forced to delete it. My opinion is that it needs to be fixed, and the bits I mentioned are the first step to fixing it.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Her age, as I understand it, she is 300+

I mean an explanation for how she's 300+, it's not required, but it's a quality touch-up so people know you aren't talking out your rear

Note I'm not very good at English. Please understand me.

Listen you are much more legible than others, and I am thankful for that

 

[Daoist_Pepe]

It's been a long time since Plunderer has had a character profile. So I created a user blog here. Please scan

Your profile is lacking in many areas. If you need help creating profiles this page is very helpful. It highlights the standard format needed to create a Vs wiki profile. Here is a picture too of Vs wiki standard profile source code

 

[Yamachiho]

Your profile is lacking in many areas. If you need help creating profiles this page is very helpful. It highlights the standard format needed to create a Vs wiki profile. Here is a picture too of Vs wiki standard profile source code

thank you

 

[Yamachiho]

Well no, you need to make it fit our standards first. You can't put it on the wiki like this, we'll just be forced to delete it. My opinion is that it needs to be fixed, and the bits I mentioned are the first step to fixing it.

Can you please close this forum? I'm going to start working on his AP.

thank you

 

[Mr. Bambu]

Aye, and do feel free to ask me or another staff member if you want more specific help.