Lee Ja-in revamp

[Pedonar]

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Old profile

New profile

Changes:

Fused the first 2 keys: Pre Human Reincarnation and Kid
Added these abilities to the key:

• Passive Self-Memory Manipulation (Retains memories after every reincarnation)
• Limited Self-Mind Manipulation (By recalling past reincarnations, he manifests their powers in his human body to enhance physical traits )
• Self-Perception Manipulation (Through manifestation, he can enhance his perception, allowing him to react to bullets)
• Rage Power (In moments of rage, his power drastically increases)
• Limited Telepathy and Dream Manipulation (He was able to communicate with his mother, who had lost her ability to speak, by appearing in the form of a dream)

For his second key i added this;

• Social Influencing (Charisma, Animal Charming and Instigating Fear - Lee Jain was admired for his looks, drawing crowds and boosting the popularity of a café just by being there. He also has a natural affinity with animals, effortlessly gaining their trust. Over time, he became feared worldwide as a monstrous figure, with his presence causing panic and hesitation)
• Marksmanship (Accurately throws objects to hit targets, even small ones like birds )
• Improved Enhanced Senses (Reads water waves and vibrations to detect individuals nearby)
• Improved Air Manipulation (Through manifestation, He can generate powerful gusts of wind by moving his hands)

For his third key:

• Martial Arts
  • Energy Manipulation (Can improve his attack by covering his fist with energy )
    • Aura (Clashed with hydra using his aura )
  • Limited Shockwave Creation (His attacks can create a shockwaves )
• Improved Extrasensory Perception (Can sense the life energy of other beings)
• Limited Resurrection (Revived Ah Leesu by transferring her life energy back)

Final key:

• Avatar Creation (Created Lee Jain as an avatar)
• Earth Manipulation and Water Manipulation (Causes massive natural disasters such as earthquakes and tsunamis)
• Power Bestowal (Granted powers to his vessel)

Made changes in description Added references/scans

 

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[DeltaStriker22]

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[Dereck03]

^^^^^

Old profile

New profile

Changes:

Fused the first 2 keys: Pre Human Reincarnation and Kid
Added these abilities to the key:

• Passive Self-Memory Manipulation (Retains memories after every reincarnation)
• Limited Self-Mind Manipulation (By recalling past reincarnations, he manifests their powers in his human body to enhance physical traits )

Fine

• Self-Perception Manipulation (Through manifestation, he can enhance his perception, allowing him to react to bullets)

It does not seem that he reacted to all the bullets, it just seems that as such they do not hurt him, but it seems that he did react to the first one so it's okay, Ig.

• Rage Power (In moments of rage, his power drastically increases)

Fine

• Limited Telepathy and Dream Manipulation (He was able to communicate with his mother, who had lost her ability to speak, by appearing in the form of a dream)

This does not have enough context, there is no communication, it just looks like a vision.

For his second key i added this;

• Social Influencing (Charisma, Animal Charming and Instigating Fear - Lee Jain was admired for his looks, drawing crowds and boosting the popularity of a café just by being there. He also has a natural affinity with animals, effortlessly gaining their trust. Over time, he became feared worldwide as a monstrous figure, with his presence causing panic and hesitation)
• Marksmanship (Accurately throws objects to hit targets, even small ones like birds )

Scans?

• Improved Enhanced Senses (Reads water waves and vibrations to detect individuals nearby)
• Improved Air Manipulation (Through manifestation, He can generate powerful gusts of wind by moving his hands)

For his third key:

• Martial Arts
  • Energy Manipulation (Can improve his attack by covering his fist with energy )
    • Aura (Clashed with hydra using his aura )
  • Limited Shockwave Creation (His attacks can create a shockwaves )
• Improved Extrasensory Perception (Can sense the life energy of other beings)

Fine

• Limited Resurrection (Revived Ah Leesu by transferring her life energy back)

Final key:

• Avatar Creation (Created Lee Jain as an avatar)
• Earth Manipulation and Water Manipulation (Causes massive natural disasters such as earthquakes and tsunamis)
• Power Bestowal (Granted powers to his vessel)

Scans?

Also, this Manwha looks interesting, I may take a look at it later.

 

[Pedonar]

Fine

It does not seem that he reacted to all the bullets, it just seems that as such they do not hurt him, but it seems that he did react to the first one so it's okay, Ig.

Fine

This does not have enough context, there is no communication, it just looks like a vision.

It happened twice: the first time was this, and the second time was near the end.

Scan

Scans?

• Social Influencing (Charisma - Lee Jain was admired for his looks, drawing crowds and boosting the popularity of a café just by being there. Animal Charming - He also has a natural affinity with animals, effortlessly gaining their trust. Instigating Fear - Over time, he became feared worldwide as a monstrous figure, with his presence causing panic and hesitation)
• Marksmanship (Accurately throws objects to hit targets, even small ones like birds )

Scans?

For his true form, it’s the same as what his vessel is capable of; it’s just that the potency becomes greater.

Also, this Manwha looks interesting, I may take a look at it later.

Enjoy and thanks

 

[Dereck03]

It happened twice: the first time was this, and the second time was near the end.

Scan

• Social Influencing (Charisma - Lee Jain was admired for his looks, drawing crowds and boosting the popularity of a café just by being there. Animal Charming - He also has a natural affinity with animals, effortlessly gaining their trust. Instigating Fear - Over time, he became feared worldwide as a monstrous figure, with his presence causing panic and hesitation)
• Marksmanship (Accurately throws objects to hit targets, even small ones like birds )

For his true form, it’s the same as what his vessel is capable of; it’s just that the potency becomes greater.

Fine then.

Enjoy and thanks

Ty.