Ghoul revision

[Tllmbrg]

Tllmbrg/Sandbox3

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So here's a draft for the revised ghoul page
So yah, say if it looks good or what should be changed

 

[Antvasima]

@Mr._Bambu

What do you think?

 

[Mr. Bambu]

Oh, right. I'm fine with it, I actually assisted with small bits of it, this revision is the reason the Ghoul King page was made.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Aight so can I apply the draft now?

 

[Mr. Bambu]

I'd get Qawsed, this is a fairly large revision and he's more separated from it than I.

 

[Qawsedf234]

Some things I'd add

• This scan for the intelligence section since as is there's no reason why a 15-18 would be genius
• You have a triple ||| in the intelligence section
• Link [18] says the Ghoul has an intelligence of 22 rather than 18
• There's a double || in the weakness section
• Dunno if stamina should be infinite or extremely high. But it doesn't matter to much
• I would add a scan for their strength rating in the lifting strength section

Overall it looks good.

 

[Tllmbrg]

I edited the page, you can check it

 

[Qawsedf234]

Looks pretty good. Though the third rating in the lifting strength section is missing a "W" for "Below".

Also in the striking strength section "Small building+ class" should have the + placement changed to the end

 

[Tllmbrg]

Aight, fixed it
Is it fine to apply now?

 

[Qawsedf234]

Final addition I would recommend is adding a link to Imix to make the 6-C rating make more sense. Once that's done you're good to go.

 

[Tllmbrg]

Okay I'll do it and then apply it

 

[Tllmbrg]

You can close the CRT

 

[Antvasima]

Qawsedf234 and Mr. Bambu: Thank you for helping out.

Tllmbrg: Okay. I will do so.