Cal Kestis Profile Revision + Ability Addition thread!

[Maitreya12]

Hey everyone.

Recently I got to play Star Wars Jedi Survivor and absolutely loved the game, highly recommend for those who are interested in checking it out. This led me though to check out some of the star wars profile, namely Cal Kestis', and suffice to say...his profile is ass bro.

The profile hasn't even been updated to include Cal's experiences during Jedi Survivor.

So I decided to create a sandbox for a new revised page for Cal along with ability additions that should be on his profile as well. Hopefully everything looks good so this can be an easy adjustment to the profiles.

Here is the blog for his revised page:

Cal Kestis Sandbox

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Hope these adjustments work for Cal's page. Because yeah, his current profile status needs reworking.

 

[Maitreya12]

Bump

 

[Dalesean027]

Looks fine to me

 

[Maitreya12]

Looks fine to me

Play the second game, let the dark side consume you.

 

[Oliver_de_jesus]

Is ok, also should add a render for the second game

 

[LordTracer]

There’s still a lot of problems here.

The page is almost completely barren of scans, there’s no references, his first key’s speed justification is completely baseless, his stamina still uses outdated terms like “high” and “very high”, his first key’s stamina doesn’t even have a justification, and his intelligence also uses the vague term “high” instead of one of the actual intelligence ratings.

 

[Dalesean027]

There’s still a lot of problems here.

The page is almost completely barren of scans, there’s no references, his first key’s speed justification is completely baseless, his stamina still uses outdated terms like “high” and “very high”, his first key’s stamina doesn’t even have a justification, and his intelligence also uses the vague term “high” instead of one of the actual intelligence ratings.

Well the page already exist this is just format changes and P&A additions for the most part otherwise its exactly the same as the current profile is so those are just problems really put towards the orignal profile because its literally even moreso barren and empty so I wouldn't put the blame here completely

See here:

Cal Kestis

Cal Kestis was a Force-sensitive human male who became a Jedi Knight during the reign of the Galactic Empire. As one of the few remaining Jedi who survived the purge that all-but destroyed the Jedi Order, Kestis lived in seclusion for years until a confrontation with the Inquisitorius compelled...

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[Maitreya12]

There’s still a lot of problems here.

The page is almost completely barren of scans, there’s no references, his first key’s speed justification is completely baseless, his stamina still uses outdated terms like “high” and “very high”, his first key’s stamina doesn’t even have a justification, and his intelligence also uses the vague term “high” instead of one of the actual intelligence ratings.

I made some more edits to the sandbox to fix some of these issues. Adding more scans, references to each, and changing the words and justifications for some things around like speed and intelligence.

Cal Kestis Sandbox

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[Marvel_Champion_07]

Looks good

 

[Maitreya12]

Bump. This thread just needs one more staff approval to pass I think.

 

[Doggo]

looks fine

 

[KingTempest]

Looks good

 

[Maitreya12]

Looks good

You are my savior

 

[Maitreya12]

Ok, since this thread has the sufficient number of staff approvals, I have applied the changes to Cal Kestis' profile page.

Cal Kestis

You know I've been alone for... a while now. Without any... purpose. Just hiding. It's no way to live. Not for a Jedi. Or a droid. Maybe Cere was right. Maybe we're done hiding.Cal Kestis, to BD-1 Wasn't always like this. But now, there are three rules to survive. Don't stand out. Accept the...

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This thread can now be closed, thanks to all those that helped out.