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Sure. My main gripe was the text went from;

"and threatened the destruction of Z-City" which is more exciting to:

"which was a threat to Z-City"

Do you like this?
"which was capable of the destruction of Z-City and its surrounding areas. This caused the city to undergo lockdown."

switch out "capable" for something more concrete. It was going to destroy Z City with certainty and I've seen "capable" used a lot in vs debates as something the character "could" be able to do but its implied. The Meteor was far from implied and still cause major damage to the city after Saitama blew it up.

Like this?
"was going to cause the destruction of Z-City and its surrounding areas with certainty"

Wait, what is wrong with using the word "threatening"?

The way you used 'threatening' made it look like the meteor was talking, which they don't do. No offense.

Hang on. How about this?
"The meteor's fall to Earth had threatened the safety of Z-City and the surrounding areas."

That is a lot better! Great sentence.

Okay. Cool! Mind if I edit this in?

Yes!

Btw, I did revert those periods on one of the profiles edited but you can add them back. Why do you want to add them?

To help make the sentences complete.

They are more like statements than sentences. Granted, the lack of periods in profiles might be the result of these wiki sites being made by young teenagers back in the late 2000's.

Oh, okay. Also, which do you prefer?
This:
"The meteor's fall to Earth had threatened the safety of Z-City and the surrounding areas."
Or this:
"The meteor was a giant extraterrestial rock in which its fall to Earth threatened the safety of Z-City and the surrounding areas."

Sorry. I'm about to got to bed. One sec

Alright.

"The meteor's fall to Earth had threatened the safety of Z-City and the surrounding areas."

This is perfect.

I wrote something up

"The Meteor was a giant extraterrestrial rock from outer space from One-Punch Man.

The Hero Association received warnings that Z-City's safety was threatened by the incoming meteor and the surrounding areas would perish. The S Class heroes failed to show up and the ones who did, Genos, Bang and Metal Knight, could not stop its advances. It was assigned a disaster level of Dragon."

This works just as good. Thank you!

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