Marina & Maria profile creation and revisions.

[Wavoizm]

Previously I had created a forum, to get approval of my Marina profile. However it seems I went about it the wrong way as the profile was removed, so I’m trying this again but this time I’m also including Maria revisions as their feats are practically the same. I have created a sandbox for both, please take a look at them and state if you agree with this creation or what you find wrong.

Marina Profile

Maria Profile

 

[Elzard77]

Good, interesting.

 

[Maniaunavailable]

agree with everything

 

[Wavoizm]

BUMP

 

[Wavoizm]

bump

 

[Wavoizm]

Bump...

 

[Wavoizm]

Bumppp

 

[Wavoizm]

bump... need staff to look at this for approval or not..

 

[Elzard77]

@Vietthai96 @Imaginym sorry for tag

 

[Wavoizm]

Bump

 

[AlipheeseXIV]

@Vietthai96 @Imaginym sorry for tag

Non staff members can't tag people so I wouldn't bother trying, but anyways I agree with their additions.

 

[Wavoizm]

bump

 

[Wavoizm]

Bump

 

[Antvasima]

@Vietthai96 @Imaginym @Elizhaa @LephyrTheRevanchist

It seems like some help here would be appreciated.

 

[Imaginym]

I'm not familiar with this verse, so I'm not sure how to evaluate this.
Currently, I do not know of any reason to oppose this, & will choose to defer to the information of knowledgeable members as presented in this thread & other staff.

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

What's the justification for the virtual world being conceptual?

 

[AlipheeseXIV]

What's the justification for the virtual world being conceptual?

It's in the AP section, it's a replica of reality and has things such as it's own laws of space-time and whatnot.

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

That doesn't justify it being conceptual in my view. Was this accepted on another thread?

 

[AlipheeseXIV]

That doesn't justify it being conceptual in my view. Was this accepted on another thread?

No, it was added here. Considering the virtual world has concepts and these characters are able to fully control every aspect of it (including manipulating its concepts) figured it would've warranted some form of CM for the virtual world but that's fine I guess.

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

No, it was added here. Considering the virtual world has concepts and these characters are able to fully control every aspect of it (including manipulating its concepts) figured it would've warranted some form of CM for the virtual world but that's fine I guess.

If you don't include such information I can't give an appropriate evaluation

Looking up some profiles, the concepts are type 3, not type 2. So change it to that. However, it should include some type of justification like "as a mirror of the real world, it should contain concepts such as those [insert character] can affect" or something to that effect.

Edit: actually, rereading the scan about controlling the parameters of the virtual world, it's severely lacking if it's truly meant to be taken as "controlling every aspect". The characters only mention there stuff that would only amount to be Body Puppetry/Status Effect Inducement through Data Manipulation (because all they did was seemingly change the parameters of the targets movement?, if I understood correctly)

So you need a bit more scans here ngl

Edit 2: Looked up another profile, which does seemingly have concept type 2, so I guess that's fine for now (though the blog used to expand the reasoning of the ability doesn't seem to have anything that would support type 2 imo, so I wonder if it's such an old profile that it got by while we revised our concept standards, but meh)

 

[AlipheeseXIV]

If you don't include such information I can't give an appropriate evaluation

Oh I thought you saw it since it's apart of the profile, but these are the scans that I mentioned were apart of the AP segment.

Looking up some profiles, the concepts are type 3, not type 2. So change it to that. However, it should include some type of justification like "as a mirror of the real world, it should contain concepts such as those [insert character] can affect" or something to that effect.

That seems fine honestly considering it's limited to the virtual world anyways.

Edit: actually, rereading the scan about controlling the parameters of the virtual world, it's severely lacking if it's truly meant to be taken as "controlling every aspect". The characters only mention there stuff that would only amount to be Body Puppetry/Status Effect Inducement through Data Manipulation (because all they did was seemingly change the parameters of the targets movement?, if I understood correctly)

So you need a bit more scans here ngl

Yeah we can fix that.

Edit 2: Looked up another profile, which does seemingly have concept type 2, so I guess that's fine for now (though the blog used to expand the reasoning of the ability doesn't seem to have anything that would support type 2 imo, so I wonder if it's such an old profile that it got by while we revised our concept standards, but meh)

I believe Mukuro's type 2 CM is pretty concrete and not merely something that slipped by from way back, although yes, it is severely lacking in scans as most profiles in the verse are. After this CRT the OP has plans to revamp the entire verse to fix such things, however I think leaving this at type 3 CM like you originally suggested is probably the safest bet. Since scaling Maria and Marina to Micheal doesn't really make much sense.

I believe this CRT only requires one staff approval right? We have 2 assuming you agree, is everything else fine with you, or are there any other things you'd like to mention that you have issues with?

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

Oh I thought you saw it since it's apart of the profile, but these are the scans that I mentioned were apart of the AP segment.

Yeah, I hyper focused to the abilities, my b. Yeah that's definitely better.

I believe Mukuro's type 2 CM is pretty concrete and not merely something that slipped by from way back, although yes, it is severely lacking in scans as most profiles in the verse are. After this CRT the OP has plans to revamp the entire verse to fix such things, however I think leaving this at type 3 CM like you originally suggested is probably the safest bet. Since scaling Maria and Marina to Micheal doesn't really make much sense.

Fair enough.

I believe this CRT only requires one staff approval right? We have 2 assuming you agree, is everything else fine with you, or are there any other things you'd like to mention that you have issues with?

Genuinely, that bit was my only problem lol. So now that it's resolved... Yeah, Imaginym and me should be enough.

 

[AlipheeseXIV]

Genuinely, that bit was my only problem lol. So now that it's resolved... Yeah, Imaginym and me should be enough.

Alright thanks, I'll wait for the OP to wrap this up then.

 

[Wavoizm]

If that’s all the agreements we need then this can be closed, Thanks.