Wilbur Waterman profile revamp CRT

[H3110l12345I20]

^^^; I'll revamp Wilbur's profile as a noice gesture and to inspire a friend of mine to have similarly done profiles.

(Remade profile)

The rules I surrounded myself with? (To obey written and unwritten rules, and increase the profile's quality)

• Editing and revamping pages
  • Keep all previous info from before.
  • Remaster the page visually and by code.
  • Use scans only where there's ambiguity or on essential stats to a profile (which are usually AP, Speed, LS and durability)

Suggestions

• • Bribery [social influencing]: Wilbur bribed Aria into joining him. Via 100 K dollars he carried around
  • Backpack as standard equipment
  • Could walk at least hundreds of meters whilst not having enough sleep, albeit the extent of his sleepiness is unknown.
  • Could fight Aria at full strength while starting to grow weak under tight food and water rations.
  • Didn’t he skillfully throw his knife from afar to cut a phone’s cable? Add several meters via throwing in the range section.
  • His speed and durability feats are definite, we should remove the "likely" rating for speed. He also withstands his charges and this is fiction, so newton’s 3rd law is valid here to remove the likely word for durability
    • Where’s the source/calcs that says an MMA fighter could do 3.118 KJ, or 15 m/s punches?
      • We should replace Aria’s speed with the mean or high-ends, which are 12.6 and 18.3 m/s respectively.
• Aria and Wilbur’s AP should be replaced with this calc of mine since it’s one that actually exists and is verifiable.

Other

• Did I miss anything?

 

[SSB64]

As the creator of "Dark Hood", I overall approve of this (Except for the $100K which he gave away pretty early on).

 

[H3110l12345I20]

As the creator of "Dark Hood", I overall approve of this (Except for the $100K which he gave away pretty early on).

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Dude, you're giving me mixed messages here on the $ 100K.

But yeah, I'll implement the confirmed changes here.

 

[SSB64]

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Dude, you're giving me mixed messages here on the $ 100K.

But yeah, I'll implement the confirmed changes here.

All I'm saying is that only early Chapter 3 and before Wilbur would have the cash.

 

[H3110l12345I20]

All I'm saying is that only early Chapter 3 and before Wilbur would have the cash.

In the moment, his cash is standard equipment, correct? Or optional equipment?

Btw, if you want to, you can put references at the end of a punctuation mark or in a bracket where ever something isn't common knowledge for future profiles.

Updated the sandbox accordingly. Will update Aria soon.

 

[H3110l12345I20]

to remove the likely word for durability

Also forgot to add this here

 

[SSB64]

I guess it would be optional equipment.

 

[H3110l12345I20]

I guess it would be optional equipment.

Revamped the page with some of the sandbox stuffs.

If you're wondering on at least some of the edits.

• Look up this page from Vsbw: https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Common_Editing_Mistakes
• I put references where ever something isn't common knowledge, information that's common knowledge is optional to put references there.
• If you dislike an edit, you can always revert some of them to their original form. While I wanted to revise some stuff to improve ease of readability, some were along the lines of "if it ain't broken, don't fix it." And you may not like some edits redone for readability

 

[SSB64]

Revamped the page with some of the sandbox stuffs.

If you're wondering on at least some of the edits.

• Look up this page from Vsbw: https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Common_Editing_Mistakes
• I put references where ever something isn't common knowledge, information that's common knowledge is optional to put references there.
• If you dislike an edit, you can always revert some of them to their original form. While I wanted to revise some stuff to improve ease of readability, some were along the lines of "if it ain't broken, don't fix it." And you may not like some edits redone for readability

Fair enough. I'll probably remove some of the keys since I have highlighted links to photos I took of the story which show those feats anyways.

That, and I'll remove the Volume 1 link since the ABO-Verse page does that already.