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Hi
As I was advised to discuss it here, I will do it here then.
I need help with my profile. Or rather, my character profile.
The thing is, that I first confused the content revision section in this forum, with the content page of the main website. Sorry for that mistake. I opened a thread there too.
However, after my public page was posted, it was also removed a bit later.
The reason for the removing was, that the structure was sloppy.
Personally, I thought everything was fine because I couldn't see any problems with my power and ability list.
I also made sure, that I back up every power and resistances with scans as much as I could and quote all references related to the powers, abilities and resistances.
However, it seems that there are still problems about my structure.
Please, can you help me? I'm still new and inexperienced.
If I made any fallacies, then I'm sorry. I don't want to exaggerate things, all I want is just create an accurate and acceptable character profile and restore my favourite universe.
So, please help me and tell me what's wrong, so that I can fix it. Are the scans the problem? Or is it the reference list? Is it the power and ability list?
Were my explanation in the explanation section perhaps unreasonable? Have I made a fallacy which I'm not aware about? I thought I was pretty reasonable with everything.
What have I overlooked?
I thank you in advance for your answers. I promise, I will do my best to fix everything.
Here is the link to my profile in the sandbox. https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:MirrorOfEmotions/Arthur_Penhaligon
As I was advised to discuss it here, I will do it here then.
I need help with my profile. Or rather, my character profile.
The thing is, that I first confused the content revision section in this forum, with the content page of the main website. Sorry for that mistake. I opened a thread there too.
However, after my public page was posted, it was also removed a bit later.
The reason for the removing was, that the structure was sloppy.
Personally, I thought everything was fine because I couldn't see any problems with my power and ability list.
I also made sure, that I back up every power and resistances with scans as much as I could and quote all references related to the powers, abilities and resistances.
However, it seems that there are still problems about my structure.
Please, can you help me? I'm still new and inexperienced.
If I made any fallacies, then I'm sorry. I don't want to exaggerate things, all I want is just create an accurate and acceptable character profile and restore my favourite universe.
So, please help me and tell me what's wrong, so that I can fix it. Are the scans the problem? Or is it the reference list? Is it the power and ability list?
Were my explanation in the explanation section perhaps unreasonable? Have I made a fallacy which I'm not aware about? I thought I was pretty reasonable with everything.
What have I overlooked?
I thank you in advance for your answers. I promise, I will do my best to fix everything.
Here is the link to my profile in the sandbox. https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:MirrorOfEmotions/Arthur_Penhaligon