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So when creating verse pages. Do you start with the character profiles first or create the verse page then the character profiles ( to easily link them when creating the verse page)
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Profile Creation: Which to do first
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Doesn't particularly matter. Usually I do a couple characters before making the verse page.
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What assault said.
The only thing that matters when making profiles is following the Standard Format for Character Profiles and Standard Format for Verse Pages
The only thing that matters when making profiles is following the Standard Format for Character Profiles and Standard Format for Verse Pages
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Oh ok. When I get time on my hands I will start creating character profiles if that is okay.
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If you want a mod to look over the profile, feel free to post it here.
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Ok thanks, will do.
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https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Kubera_Leez Placement is iffy for profile pic and last slideshow. Going to fix it when I wake up if no one does it by then.
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the very end of the profile is the part I'd say needs more work since there's nothing about the sword of return, except for a picture that's going through the border.
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Format is a bit off. You need to add the original rating, not just "higher."
Also the font size of the bottom text is interesting.
Also the font size of the bottom text is interesting.
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I cleaned some stuff up, but what is the "Negation?"
1. Killing Humans is Street level, not Wall level.
2. The crater doesn't mean Small Building unless calced at Small Building.
3. No justification for Superhuman is a big no-no. Reverted to Athletic Human since I assume she is athletic.
4. Same as above for Lifting Strength, Striking Strength, and Durability with the respective levels.
5. Regenerating from fatal damage is Low-Mid, not just Low.
6. Added flight, gravity manipulation, and attack reflection, since those powers are in her techniques both not listed.
7. Reformatted the equipment and techniques sections.
8. She had no categories, so I added all applicable categories.
9. A lot of general inconsistency in ratings. I fixed and matched them all.
10. Some grammar and wording errors were altered and fixed.
Let me know if I missed something or one of my edits isn't correct.
1. Killing Humans is Street level, not Wall level.
2. The crater doesn't mean Small Building unless calced at Small Building.
3. No justification for Superhuman is a big no-no. Reverted to Athletic Human since I assume she is athletic.
4. Same as above for Lifting Strength, Striking Strength, and Durability with the respective levels.
5. Regenerating from fatal damage is Low-Mid, not just Low.
6. Added flight, gravity manipulation, and attack reflection, since those powers are in her techniques both not listed.
7. Reformatted the equipment and techniques sections.
8. She had no categories, so I added all applicable categories.
9. A lot of general inconsistency in ratings. I fixed and matched them all.
10. Some grammar and wording errors were altered and fixed.
Let me know if I missed something or one of my edits isn't correct.
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Ok, thank you. Looks much better than when I did it O.O The negation comes from Sword of Return, it neutralizes the natural regenerative abilities of a person (affects gods). But has no effect on them if say their regen is caused by magic or so on.
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https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Asha_Rahiro
Second profile created. Hopefully better than the first.
Second profile created. Hopefully better than the first.
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1. Striking Strength uses "Athlete Class," not "Athlete level."
2. Durability is the same as Attack Potency, so Street level.
3. There was no Key present; I have added one.
4. You need to work on your grammar. I don't want to be mean, but some of this is basic. Sentences start with capital letters. Try to avoid sentence fragments. All proper names or titles (the Hoti spells, etc.) should be capitalized.
5. Being human isn't a weakness, and if he is casting magic he isn't normal by our standards.
6. There seem to be 3 forms she has, but only 2 keys are present in certain places. I have changed this according to what I think makes sense. Correct me if this is wrong.
7. I left it in, but is a lightning-based attack really speed of light? You may need some sources to prove that.
8. The weaknesses of the spells are best kept for the weakness section, rather than in the actual abilities descriptions.
2. Durability is the same as Attack Potency, so Street level.
3. There was no Key present; I have added one.
4. You need to work on your grammar. I don't want to be mean, but some of this is basic. Sentences start with capital letters. Try to avoid sentence fragments. All proper names or titles (the Hoti spells, etc.) should be capitalized.
5. Being human isn't a weakness, and if he is casting magic he isn't normal by our standards.
6. There seem to be 3 forms she has, but only 2 keys are present in certain places. I have changed this according to what I think makes sense. Correct me if this is wrong.
7. I left it in, but is a lightning-based attack really speed of light? You may need some sources to prove that.
8. The weaknesses of the spells are best kept for the weakness section, rather than in the actual abilities descriptions.
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