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The first revision is in sanemis profile.
İts an small revision but in sanemis speed scaling, its says sanemi avoided Kokushibo's crescent moons that caught Marked Transparent World Muichiro off guard despite having no swinging motion.
But first thing is sanemi didnt fully avoid Kokushibos crescent moons
Although I am not entirely certain how to articulate this, when Kokushibo initiates his attack, Sanemi is unable to evade it and is struck. However, while being pushed back by the force of the blow, he manages to deflect several crescent-shaped blades approaching him by altering their trajectories. Since Sanemi is propelled in the same direction as the attack, he effectively gains additional time to adjust his own movement. Therefore, this adjustment appears to be less related to his speed and more to his superhuman agility. For this reason, I believe that this particular statement should be removed.
The second thing is "that caught Marked Transparent World Muichiro off guard"
Muichiro didnt caught off guard he cutted by kokushibo because he want to stop kokushibo as much as he can as you can see there
İ think its should be removed to.
Thats all
İts an small revision but in sanemis speed scaling, its says sanemi avoided Kokushibo's crescent moons that caught Marked Transparent World Muichiro off guard despite having no swinging motion.
But first thing is sanemi didnt fully avoid Kokushibos crescent moons
Although I am not entirely certain how to articulate this, when Kokushibo initiates his attack, Sanemi is unable to evade it and is struck. However, while being pushed back by the force of the blow, he manages to deflect several crescent-shaped blades approaching him by altering their trajectories. Since Sanemi is propelled in the same direction as the attack, he effectively gains additional time to adjust his own movement. Therefore, this adjustment appears to be less related to his speed and more to his superhuman agility. For this reason, I believe that this particular statement should be removed.
The second thing is "that caught Marked Transparent World Muichiro off guard"
Muichiro didnt caught off guard he cutted by kokushibo because he want to stop kokushibo as much as he can as you can see there
İ think its should be removed to.
Thats all
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