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I write fanfiction (yes surprising, I know), and I need a little criticism. Now, you must be thinking, 'Wat? Someone who wants to be judged? Unheared of.'
Well, I write really niche stories. As such, very few people get to take a look which means very few people say anything to help me improve and thus, my writing suffers.
I'm not asking for much, I just want to know what people think, where can I improve, and if I got some of the lore wrong in what I wrote, don't kill me.
Please and thank you in advance.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11745220/1/The-Universal-Vampires-Associatio
Well, I write really niche stories. As such, very few people get to take a look which means very few people say anything to help me improve and thus, my writing suffers.
I'm not asking for much, I just want to know what people think, where can I improve, and if I got some of the lore wrong in what I wrote, don't kill me.
Please and thank you in advance.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11745220/1/The-Universal-Vampires-Associatio
