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VS Battles Wiki Forum

Mr. Bambu
Mr. Bambu
The obvious usual advice applies: you really need to start passing these things through a grammar checker or something. There's issues with spacing ("Quirce,Returned by the Flames is an boss of the game "Blasphemous",he"), run-on sentences (the entire summary is one sentence at the moment), and word tense ("his swords floats around him").

I'm not actually too knowledgeable about Blasphemous to offer advice on the content of the page aside from formatting. I've played it a bit, fell in love with it artistically but couldn't **** with the control scheme (both on PC and PS4, bought it twice to give it two tries). I will say that before pushing that Subsonic speed, you may want to create a discussion on the subject with knowledgeable people, if only because it may be used to give an appropriate speed to the rest of the verse, if only in terms of combat speed.

None of your abilities have timestamps so I can't really do much about confirming them. I note that all of them are also not clean links (that is, they include the bit "si=[a lot of random shit here]"), meaning anyone who clicks on them will have their information linked to yours, which sucks.
Homie890
Homie890
1.Ok,i see.
2.Hmm,so something like a crt?
3.******* Youtube links,how do i fix them?
Mr. Bambu
Mr. Bambu
2. Maybe. I don't know the situation of the verse or whether it would be scaleable, I think you should at least ask knowledgeable members (I doubt there's a discussion thread, but if there is one, then you should ask there, too)
3. Remove everything after the "si=" in the link. Link itself will still work.
Homie890
Homie890
Understood.
Homie890
Homie890
i have removed everthing after the si=,also,you said that none of the timestamps works?
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