Fang Xiu Profile Creation & Kelly Profile Revision (Low Dimensional Game)

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Fang Xiu (The Pearl of Space and Time)

Test Page 6

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Kelly (Goddess of Light)

Test Page 10

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(Old Kelly Profile)

 

[Setsuna_tenma]

Fang 8B key leads a calc that results in 8A. Also wasn't there a feat of shaterring hundreds of KM of ice in the previous thread. That seems a good way to calc level 7. Other than it seems fine.

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Fang 8B key leads a calc that results in 8A. Also wasn't there a feat of shaterring hundreds of KM of ice in the previous thread. That seems a good way to calc level 7. Other than it seems fine.

Fixed it, also If I remember correctly that was Lu Zhiyu getting shot by a continent-busting laser, but he was Level 8 at the time so it doesn't scale.

 

[Setsuna_tenma]

What about the metor feat?

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

What about the metor feat?

That was done at Level 7 so you could calc the energy required to make something like an asteroid accelerate across millions of miles in seconds.

 

[Confluctor]

Will check properly later. But looks good at a glance

 

[Muchacho_mrm]

While I don't understand the need for a CRT for Fang Xiu, I agree with the Kelly profile rework. Just wanted to say though, you should link the current profile and the reworked version next to each other. Also, NPI has no reference.

Probably me, but she seems to stand out in whatever she does... Her intelligence reasoning seems gifted rather than above average...

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

While I don't understand the need for a CRT for Fang Xiu, I agree with the Kelly profile rework. Just wanted to say though, you should link the current profile and the reworked version next to each other. Also, NPI has no reference.

Fixed all that.

Probably me, but she seems to stand out in whatever she does... Her intelligence reasoning seems gifted rather than above average...

I suppose so now that I read over it.

 

[Confluctor]

Summoning (Fang Xiu can summon a ghost from his own body that is capable of acting on its own, eating attacks and artifacts

Wouldn't this be some form of creation?


Anyway, having looked through most, I suppose it should work

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Wouldn't this be some form of creation?

Anyway, having looked through most, I suppose it should work

Well he's not really creating them, he made the technique but afterward the ghost and stuff are always inside of him it's just he has to summon them.

 

[Confluctor]

Interesting

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Interesting

Since both of their tiers (AP, Speed, etc) are via already checked blogs and cosmology can I add them or should I wait for more feedback?

 

[Confluctor]

Probably wait for a bit

 

[Maverick_Zero_X]

The content of the blogs looks fine at a glance.

 

[Antvasima]

@First_Witch @Elizhaa @KingPin0422 @Qawsedf234 @Pain_to12 @Executor_N0

What do you think about the justifications for Low 1-A in one of the above profile page drafts?

 

[Antvasima]

The draft pages themselves seem to be well-constructed though, as long as all of the statistics based on energy levels have accepted calculations as a basis.

 

[Qawsedf234]

What do you think about the justifications for Low 1-A in one of the above profile page drafts?

The Low 1-A justification makes sense, the only issue I can see with it is maybe someone considering it a bit wordy.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. Thank you for helping out. It is probably fine to apply then, but let's wait a bit longer in order to make certain.

 

[PrinceofPein]

Aside from being wordy, he should probably make the PnA section into a tabber and something easier to read.

But the justification seems fine

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. Thank you for helping out so much. It is very appreciated.

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Okay. Thank you for helping out so much. It is very appreciated.

I shortened the Low 1-A justifications, so is it ok to post now?

 

[Antvasima]

Probably, yes, but let's wait a while for confirmations.

 

[PrinceofPein]

I shortened the Low 1-A justifications, so is it ok to post now?

If you are going to use endless space as justification for low 1-A, you should try and add the reason why the space is low 1-A, instead of writing a long text. It can be something like

“Can create and destroy the endless space which is a space that transcends infinite dimensional structures”

Since most of the justification is based around endless space and nothing more. Just two out of the three will suffice

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

If you are going to use endless space as justification for low 1-A, you should try and add the reason why the space is low 1-A, instead of writing a long text. It can be something like

“Can create and destroy the endless space which is a space that transcends infinite dimensional structures”

Since most of the justification is based around endless space and nothing more. Just two out of the three will suffice

Are the changes I just made better?

 

[PrinceofPein]

Are the changes I just made better?

Perfectly fine

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

Probably, yes, but let's wait a while for confirmations.

The Low 1-A Character is part of the Cosmology Blog Ultima accepted in the last thread if it's the validity of the rating that is a concern.

 

[Setsuna_tenma]

kelly should be fine to edit but fang requires staff approval

 

[Elizhaa]

The blog profiles largely seem fine.

 

[ActuallySpaceMan42]

The blog profiles largely seem fine.

Does this all seem fine to apply then?

 

[Setsuna_tenma]

Does this all seem fine to apply then?

Just edit Kelly for now and wait for fang

 

[Antvasima]

Does this all seem fine to apply then?

It seems so, yes, unless anybody here has any objections.