Can someone review my sandbox and see if its good enough to be made into a page

[SuperbNed]

I have made a sandbox page for Lore from Heartbound

If I am correct all I need to do now is ask someone to look at the sandbox page and if everything is ok with it then it can be made into a profile

Would Anyone be willing to look at the sandbox page and determine if its good enough to be made into a profile.

SuperbNed/Sandbox

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[Adem_Warlock69]

Why is he Building level and Supersonic+?

 

[Ogbunabali]

There's a lot of formatting errors. Make sure you follow the instructions of the Standard format and the Common Editing mistakes.

Standard Format for Character Profiles

When there are multiple versions of a character that are distinct enough to be split into several profiles, whether it is due to the length and complexity of the page or versions from different mediums, then the multiple pages that are created as a result of this have to be linked by a tabber...

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Common Editing Mistakes

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Also the justifications for the statistics are very poor, and seem to be guesswork. You need a calc for dodging lasers, and the justification for the AP is destroying a character that doesn't have a profile, nor is there a link anywhere with a feat that would give this character that rating.

 

[SuperbNed]

There's a lot of formatting errors. Make sure you follow the instructions of the Standard format and the Common Editing mistakes.

Standard Format for Character Profiles

When there are multiple versions of a character that are distinct enough to be split into several profiles, whether it is due to the length and complexity of the page or versions from different mediums, then the multiple pages that are created as a result of this have to be linked by a tabber...

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Common Editing Mistakes

This is a page to help our members avoid common mistakes when writing source code, so other members do not need to spend considerable time cleaning up the mess. It is highly recommended that new users familiarize themselves with the contents of this page before making any edits on the wiki...

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Also the justifications for the statistics are very poor, and seem to be guesswork. You need a calc for dodging lasers, and the justification for the AP is destroying a character that doesn't have a profile, nor is there a link anywhere with a feat that would give this character that rating.

Thank you for responding

I will try to fix the mistakes on the page

 

[Bobsican]

Explanation blogs also generally just remain as such, explanation blogs.
The last time we posted them as actual pages out of "so everyone can edit them", ended up getting outdated anyways out of a lack of knowledgeable members.
However, it can still be linked to the verse page as if it was another page once it reaches good enought quality and usability.

 

[Jinsye]

uh

Heartbound as a game hasn't even been released yet. It's still early access.

 

[Bobsican]

Lol, in that case that shouldn't even be done yet.